10 points Please double check my grammar. English is my second language. ?

Question

1.) Hard working and diligent

My accomplishment in the United States proved I am a hard worker who motivate to get a job done effective and efficiently. I studied and worked in the United States for over 6 years. I maintained high GPA while worked 30-40 hours per week and contributed to many groups and organization both Thai and American communities. I received various recognition and rewards from being a hard working and diligent. I am proud of my character and its result. I am a hard worker and will always be a hard worker.

2.) Ambitious and goal-oriented

I have always been motivated by my desire to be successful. I set a goal and work diligently to reach my goal. In college, I studied hard, completed all my assignment on time, and never missed a class. I earned Master’s degree at age 22. At work, I worked hard to get a job done perfectly. I constantly attended professional development trainings to gain knowledge, skills, and experience. I always received rewords and recognition from my employers. I truly believe my ambitious play a significant role in my today accomplishment.

3.) Reliable

My American supervisor always says, “Hope is my favorite worker because she has impeccable character and is a dependable worker”. I enjoy receiving a good feedback from supervisor, co-workers, and subordinates. I am a great worker because I want to get the job done right and always do my best to increase organization’s productivity.

4.) Fast learner

I was always assigned to attend conferences, professional trainings, and seminars and asked to train my co-workers and subordinates because my supervisors believed I am a fast learner who can process and deliver information quickly and efficiently. Being a fast leaner help me to complete assignments quickly and able to help others.

5.) Professionalism

My work experience from the Royal Thai Embassy and American Companies taught me the important of professionalism. I know my demeanor reflects on my organization and I want people’s impressions of me to always be positive for that reason. I am dressed in professional attire daily, and I always try to be helpful to supervisors, co-workers, subordinates, and clients.

Answer 1

1.) Hard working and diligent

My accomplishment in the United States proved I am a hard worker who is motivated to get a job done effective and efficiently. I studied and worked in the United States for over 6 years. I maintained high GPA while working 30-40 hours per week and contributed to many groups and organizations; both Thai and American communities. I received various recognition and rewards from being  hard working and diligent. I am proud of my character and its result. I am and always will be a hard worker.

2.) Ambitious and goal-oriented

I have always been motivated by my desire to be successful. I set a goal and work diligently to reach my goal. In college, I studied hard, completed all my assignments on time, and never missed a class. I earned Master’s degree at age 22. At work, I worked hard to get the job done perfectly. I constantly attended professional development trainings to gain knowledge, skills, and experience. I always received rewards and recognition from my employers. I truly believe my ambitions play a significant role in my accomplishments today.

3.) Reliable

My American supervisor always says, “Hope is my favorite worker because she has impeccable character and is a dependable worker”. I enjoy receiving good feedback from supervisor, co-workers, and subordinates. I am a great worker because I want to get the job done right and I always do my best to increase the organization’s productivity.

4.) Fast learner

I was always assigned to attend conferences, professional trainings, and seminars. I was also asked to train my co-workers and subordinates because my supervisors believed I am a fast learner who can process and deliver information quickly and efficiently. Being a fast leaner helped me to complete assignments quickly and able to help others.

5.) Professionalism

My work experience from the Royal Thai Embassy and American Companies taught me the importance of professionalism. I know my demeanor reflects on my organization and I want people’s impressions of me to always be positive for that reason. I am dressed in professional attire daily, and I always try to be helpful to supervisors, co-workers, subordinates, and clients.

Answer 2

1.) Hard working and diligent

My accomplishments in the United States have proved I am a hard worker who is motivated to get a job done effective and efficiently. I have studied and worked in the United States for over 6 years while maintaining a high GPA and working 30-40 hours per week and contributing to many groups and organizations, both Thai and American. I have received various recognitions and rewards for being hard working and diligent. I am proud of my character and its result.

2.) Ambitious and goal-oriented

I have always been motivated by my desire to be successful. I set a goal and work diligently to reach my goal. In college, I studied hard, completed all my assignments on time, and never missed a class. I earned a Master’s degree at age 22. At work, I worked hard to get a job done perfectly. I constantly attended professional development trainings to gain knowledge, skills, and experience. I always received rewards and recognition from my employers. I truly believe my ambitions play a significant role in my accomplishments today.

3.) Reliable

My American supervisor always says, “Hope is my favorite worker because she has impeccable character and is a dependable worker”. I enjoy receiving feedback from supervisor, co-workers, and subordinates. I am a great worker because I want to get the job done right and always do my best to increase the organization’s productivity.

4.) Fast learner

I was always assigned to attend conferences, professional trainings, and seminars and asked to train my co-workers and subordinates because my supervisors believed I am a fast learner who can process and deliver information quickly and efficiently. Being a fast learner has heedlp me to complete assignments quickly and able to help others.

5.) Professionalism

My work experience from the Royal Thai Embassy and American Companies taught me the importance of professionalism. I know my demeanor reflects on my organization and I want people’s impressions of me to always be positive for that reason. I am dressed in professional attire daily, and I always try to be helpful to supervisors, co-workers, subordinates, and clients.

Answer 3

100% perfect. Good work :-) & good luck. But write the numbers in words. eg. 22.. should be ... Twenty two.. :-)

Answer 4

Here is a revised version:  (I would hire you.  sounds great)

1.) Hard working and diligent

My accomplishments in the United States prove that I am a hard worker who is motivated to get a job done effectively and efficiently. I studied and worked in the United States for over 6 years. I maintained a high GPA while working 30-40 hours per week and contributed to many groups and organizations in both Thai and American communities. I received various recognition and rewards for being hard working and diligent. I am proud of my character and its results. I am a hard worker and will always be a hard worker.

2.) Ambitious and goal-oriented

I have always been motivated by my desire to be successful. I set a goal and work diligently to reach my goal. In college, I studied hard, completed all my assignment on time, and never missed a class. I earned a Master’s degree at age 22. At work, I worked hard to get a job done perfectly. I constantly attended professional development trainings to gain knowledge, skills, and experience. I always received rewords and recognition from my employers. I truly believe my ambitious play a significant role in my today accomplishment.

3.) Reliable

My American supervisor always says, “Hope is my favorite worker, because she has impeccable character and is a dependable worker”. I enjoy receiving good feedback from supervisors, co-workers, and subordinates. I am a great worker, because I want to get the job done right and always do my best to increase organization and productivity.

4.) Fast learner

I was always assigned to attend conferences, professional trainings, and seminars and asked to train my co-workers and subordinates, because my supervisors believed I was a fast learner who could process and deliver information quickly and efficiently. Being a fast leaner helps me complete assignments quickly and help others.

5.) Professionalism

My work experience from the Royal Thai Embassy and American Companies taught me the importance of professionalism. I know my demeanor reflects on my organization and I want people’s impressions of me to always be positive for that reason. I am dressed in professional attire daily, and I always try to be helpful to supervisors, co-workers, subordinates, and clients.

Answer 5

1.) Hard working and diligent

My accomplishments in the United States have proved that I am a hard worker who is motivated to get a job done effective and efficiently. I have studied and worked in the United States for over 6 years. I maintained a high GPA while working 30-40 hours per week and contributed to many groups and organizations with both Thai and American communities. I received various recognition and rewards from being a hard working and diligent person. I am proud of my character and its result. I am a hard worker and will always be a hard worker.

2.) Ambitious and goal-oriented

I have always been motivated by my desire to be successful. I set a goal and worked diligently to reach my goal. In college, I studied hard, completed all my assignments on time, and never missed a class. I earned my Master’s degree at age 22. At work, I work hard to get a job done perfectly. I constantly attended professional development training to gain knowledge, skills, and experience. I have always received rewards and recognition from my employers. I truly believe my ambitions play a significant role in my accomplishments today.

3.) Reliable

My American supervisor always says, “Hope is my favorite worker because she has impeccable character and is a dependable worker”. I enjoy receiving  good feedback from my supervisor, co-workers, and subordinates. I am a great worker because I want to get the job done right and always do my best to increase the organization’s productivity.

4.) Fast learner

I was always assigned to attend conferences, professional trainings, and seminars, and asked to train my co-workers and subordinates because my supervisor believed I am a fast learner who can process and deliver information quickly and efficiently. Being a fast learner helps me to complete assignments quickly and able to help others.

5.) Professionalism

My work experience from the Royal Thai Embassy and American Companies taught me the importance of professionalism. I know my demeanor reflects on my organization and I want people’s impressions of me to always be positive for that reason. I am dressed in professional attire daily, and I always try to be helpful to supervisors, co-workers, subordinates, and clients.

I redid some punctuation and you got some plurals and spelling wrong. I corrected it all for you :)

Answer 6

If you want to follow the correct English way of writing, don't use numbers in your paragraphs, you have to spell the numbers out.  

Answer 7

sure looks good

Answer 8

1.) Hard working and diligent

My accomplishment in the United States proved that I am a hard worker who is  motivated to get a job done effectively and efficiently. I have studied and worked in the United States for over 6 years. I have maintained a high GPA while working 30-40 hours per week and contributing to many groups and organization of both Thai and American communities. I received  recognition and many rewards for being a hard worker and diligent. I am proud of my character and its outcome. I am a hard worker and will always be a hard worker.

2.) Ambitious and goal-oriented

I have always been motivated by my desire to be successful and if I set a goal I work diligently to reach my goal. In college, I studied hard, completing all my assignments on time, and never missed a class. I earned my  Master’s degree at the age of  22. At work, I worked hard to get my job done perfectly. I constantly attended professional development trainings to gain knowledge, skills, and experience. I always received rewards and recognition from my employers. I truly believe my ambitions have played a significant role in my  accomplishment till date.



3.) Reliable

My American supervisor always says, “Hope is my favorite worker because it has an impeccable character and is a dependable worker”. I enjoy receiving a good feedback from my supervisors, co-workers, and subordinates. I am a great worker because I want to get the job done right and always stive to do my best to increase organization’s productivity.

4.) Fast learner

I was always assigned to attend conferences, professional trainings, and seminars and asked to train my co-workers and subordinates because my supervisors believed I am a fast learner who can process and deliver information quickly and efficiently. Being a fast leaner helped me to complete assignments quickly and made me able to help others.

5.) Professionalism

My work experience from the Royal Thai Embassy and American Companies taught me the importance of professionalism. I know my demeanor reflects on my organization and I want people’s impressions of me to always be positive for that reason. I  dress in professional attire daily, and I try to be helpful to supervisors, co-workers, subordinates, and clients.

Answer 9

In my opinion, this sounds great!

You completed your master's at 22?

How did you manage to do that?

Answer 10

Sorry it is too long for me to go through, I am on holidays

Answer 11

My accomplishment in the United States proved I am a hard worker who is motivated to get a job done effectively and efficiently. I studied and worked in the United States for over 6 years. I maintained high GPA while working 30-40 hours per week and contributed to many groups and organizations, both Thai and American communities. I received various recognition and rewards from being a hard working and diligent. I am proud of my character and its result. I am a hard worker and will always be a hard worker.

I have always been motivated by my desire to be successful. I set a goal and work diligently to reach my goal. In college, I studied hard, completed all my assignment on time, and never missed a class. I earned a Master’s degree at age 22. At work, I put in a lot of effort to get the job done perfectly. I constantly attended professional development trainings to gain knowledge, skills, and experience. I always received rewords and recognition from my employers. I truly believe my ambitions play a significant role in my accomplishments today.

My American supervisor always says, “Hope is my favorite worker because she has impeccable character and is a dependable worker”. I enjoy receiving (no a) good feedback from supervisor, co-workers, and subordinates. I am a great worker because I want to get the job done right and always do my best to increase the organization’s productivity.

I was always assigned? to attend conferences, professional trainings, and seminars and asked to train my co-workers and subordinates because my supervisors believe(no d) I am a fast learner who can process and deliver information quickly and efficiently. Being a fast leaner helps me to complete assignments quickly and in turn I am able to help others.

I hope this helps, i only made a few changes.

Good luck = )

Answer 12

1.) Hard working and diligent

My accomplishment in the United States proved I am a hard worker who  is motivated to get a job done effectively and efficiently. I studied and worked in the United States for over 6 years. I maintained high GPA while worked 30-40 hours per week and contributed to many groups and organizations, both Thai and American communities. I received various recognition and rewards from being hard working and diligent. I am proud of my character and it's result. I am a hard worker and will always be a hard worker.

2.) Ambitious and goal-oriented

I have always been motivated by my desire to be successful. I set a goal and work diligently to reach my goal. In college, I studied hard, completed all my assignment on time, and never missed a class. I earned Master’s degree at age 22. At work, I worked hard to get a job done perfectly. I constantly attended professional development trainings to gain knowledge, skills, and experience. I always received rewords and recognition from my employers. I truly believe my ambitious play a significant role in my today accomplishment.

3.) Reliable

My American supervisor always says, “Hope is my favorite worker because she has impeccable character and is a dependable worker”. I enjoy receiving good feedback from my supervisor, co-workers, and subordinates. I am a great worker because I want to get the job done right and always do my best to increase the organization’s productivity.

4.) Fast learner

I was always assigned to attend conferences, professional training, and seminars and asked to train my co-workers and subordinates because my supervisors believed I am a fast learner who can process and deliver information quickly and efficiently. Being a fast leaner helps me to complete assignments quickly and able to help others.

5.) Professionalism

My work experience from the Royal Thai Embassy and American Companies taught me the important of professionalism. I know my demeanor reflects on my organization and I want people’s impressions of me to always be positive for that reason. I am dressed in professional attire daily, and I always try to be helpful to supervisors, co-workers, subordinates, and clients.

Just had to fix a few grammatical errors :)

Answer 13

a hard worker who motivate to

a hard worker who is motivated to

rom being a hard working and diligent.

from being a hard and diligent worker

completed all my assignment on time

completed all my assingments on time

I truly believe my ambitious play a significant role in my today accomplishment.

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Being a fast leaner help me to complete assignments quickly and able to help others.

Being a fast learner helped me to ...

Goodluck on whatever you're intending on using this for : )

Answer 14

i fixed what i could, there were a few minor changes because you switched back and forth from past and present tenses, good luck with everything. and I thank you for everything you have done in the United States.

1.) Hard working and diligent

My accomplishments in the United States proved that I am a hard worker who was motivated to get a job done effectively and efficiently. I studied and worked in the United States for over six years. I maintained a high GPA in school while working 30-40 hours per week and contributed to many groups and organizations to both Thai and American communities. I received various recognitions and rewards from being a hard working and diligent individual. I am proud of my accomplishments and their results. I am a hard worker and will always remain being a hard worker.

2.) Ambitious and goal-oriented

I have always been motivated by my desire to be successful. I set a goal and work diligently to reach my goal. In college, I studied hard, completed all my assignments on time, and never missed a class. I earned a Master’s degree at the age of 22. At work, I worked hard to get a job done perfectly. I constantly attended professional development trainings to gain knowledge, skills, and experience. I always received rewards and recognition from my employers. I truly believe my ambitions played a significant role in my accomplishments today.

3.) Reliable

My American supervisor always says, “Hope is my favorite worker because she has impeccable character and is a dependable worker”. I enjoy receiving good feedback from a supervisor, co-workers, and subordinates. I am a great worker because I want to get the job done right and I always do my best to increase the organization’s productivity.

4.) Fast learner

I was always assigned to attend conferences, professional trainings, and seminars. I was eventually asked to train my co-workers and subordinates because my supervisors believed that I was a fast learner who could process and deliver information quickly and efficiently. Being a fast leaner helped me to complete assignments quickly and helped me to be able to help others as well.

5.) Professionalism

My work experience from the Royal Thai Embassy and American Companies has taught me the importantance of professionalism. I know my demeanor reflects on my organization and I want people’s impressions of me to always be positive for that reason. I am dressed in professional attire daily, and I always try to be helpful to my supervisors, co-workers, subordinates, and clients.  

Answer 15

(this means what shoud?shoudnt be there)

1.) Hard working and diligent

My accomplishment in the United States proved I am a hard worker who (is) motivat(ed) to get a job done effective(ly) and efficiently. I studied and worked in the United States for over 6 years. I maintained high GPA while worked 30-40 hours per week and contributed to many groups and organization(s) both Thai and American communities. I received various recognition and rewards from being a hard working and diligent. I am proud of my character and its result. I am a hard worker and will always be a hard worker.

2.) Ambitious and goal-oriented

I have always been motivated by my desire to be successful. I set a goal and work diligently to reach my goal. In college, I studied hard, completed all my assignment(s) on time, and never missed a class. I earned Master’s degree at age 22. At work, I worked hard to get a job done perfectly. I constantly attended professional development trainings to gain knowledge, skills, and experience. I always received rew(a)rds and recognition from my employers. I truly believe my ambitious(ness)or(ambition) play(s) a significant role in my today accomplishment(s).

3.) Reliable

My American supervisor always says, “Hope is my favorite worker because she has impeccable character and is a dependable worker”. I enjoy receiving a good feedback from supervisor, co-workers, and subordinates. I am a great worker because I want to get the job done right and always do my best to increase organization’s productivity.

4.) Fast learner

I was always assigned to attend conferences, professional trainings, and seminars and asked to train my co-workers and subordinates because my supervisors believed I am a fast learner who can process and deliver information quickly and efficiently. Being a fast leaner help me to complete assignments quickly and able to help others.

5.) Professionalism

My work experience from the Royal Thai Embassy and American Companies taught me the important of professionalism. I know my demeanor reflects on my organization and I want people’s impressions of me to always be positive for that reason. I am dressed in professional attire daily, and I always try to be helpful to supervisors, co-workers, subordinates, and clients.

good 4 u!