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The following are some royal comments. “… His majesty the king claims building water gates to lead the water goes out of the east is an effective method to solve drought water, flood, brine issues. His Majesty the king convinces, after his consulting team calculate cost benefit analysis, building dams and water gates is the most efficient way to solve the issues and will save some cash in the long run. His Majesty the king believes building water gates get rid of brackish and increasing shrimps production as well as creating more agricultural and fishy careers…..”

Operating

The subcommittees from various ministries must work together to create effective and practicable that will produce the highest benefit for residents of Pakpanang. His Majesty has also hired several environment consultants to work with subcommittees and the royal irrigation workers. 7 November, 2538 the cabinet has officially approved the project, by the plan operating between 2538-2546, using budget money approximately 15,800,000,000 Thai baht. The project has three significant components includes: compose of construction side irrigation work; follows to correct environment effect; and development agricultural work in Pakpanang.

The Organization Operates

There are several executive committees and subcommittees as follows:

1.) Pakpanang River Basin Project Executive Committees

2.) Pakpanang River Basin Project Subcommittees

3.) Royal Irrigation Department Subcommittees

4.) Pakpanang River Basin Public Relations Project Subcommittees

5.) Pakpanang River Basin Agriculture System Subcommittees

Characteristic of the project

Pakpanang River Basin Project composes of four major components

1.) Irrigation construction: The Royal Irrigation Department was assigned to

be a project administrator, which budget is approximately 13,400,000,000 Thai baht. The project composes of various components includes constructing water gates and flood gates to release and obstruct Pakpanang River and building ridges to separate fresh water and brine water.

2.) Environmental Solution: Ministry of Science and Technology determines

pollution control area; Department of Fisheries develops law and regulations about the shrimp farms and its location; Agriculture and Cooperative Society for Agriculture Bank support special loans for farmers; other government sectors follow the same law and regulation as well as checking on-going environmental issues.

Results:

• Eradicate the weed in nature channel

• Build a pipe treats the dirty water from shrimps markets

• Construct a pipe treats the dirty water from local community

• Verify qualities of underground water, seawater, and soil

• Follow fishry resources around Pakpanang River area

3.) Developing Agriculture

Ministry of Science and Technology established the major policy

as follow: improve quality and quantity of rice production; encourage integrated

agriculture; organize shrimps farms and its locations; conserve soil, water, and other

environment; and develop organizations for agriculture.

Results:

• Rice production increases

• In-season rice farms increases

• Out-of-season rice farms increases

• Resuscitate shrimp industries

• Improve integrated agriculture

• Support other agricultural careers

4.) Public Relations

Pakpanang River Basin is a large project; therefore, public relations

plays significant role to communicate between the king, officials, and the residents.

Benefits

1.) Protect the trespass of the brine to agriculture land

2.) Create fresh water resources

3.) Diminish natural disaster

4.) Eliminate the argument between shrimp farmers and rice farmers

5.) Reduce migration issues

6.) Increase quality and quantity of agriculture product

7.) Improve quality of life

8.) Resuscitate overall Pakpanang’s ecology system

In conclusion, Pakpanang River Basin Project is one of three thousands

projects that the king proposes around the country. This project is an effective way to

to create many agriculture and fishery careers and improve qualities of life. As a

consequence, we can proudly say our beloved king is an intelligent, visionary,

and charismatic leader.

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  1. call or email this to

    A) your teacher     (they like to help students who ask for help)

    B) a colleague

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  2. I'll try my best. So here it goes:

    The followings are some of the royal comments, “… His majesty the King, claims that building water gates, channeling the water out of the east area is an effective method to solve drought, flood and brine issues. His Majesty the King is convinced, after consulting with his ministers, with regards to saving costs, building dams and water gates is the most efficient way to solve the country's issues and will provide more profitable returns in the future. His Majesty the King, believes building water gates, helps get rid of brackish and enhances an increase in shrimp productivity as well as stimulating more agricultural and fishery activities…..”

    Operation

    The subcommittees from various ministries must work together to create an effectiveness and a practical solution that will produce the highest benefits for residents of Pakpanang. His Majesty has also hired several environment consultants to work with subcommittees and the royal irrigation workers. On the 7th of November, 2538 cabinet ministers has officially approved of the project, with the plan operating between 2538-2546 ministers, using budget money approximately 15,800,000,000 Thai baht. The project has three significant components which includes: compose of construction side irrigation work; means to correct environmental effects; and the development of agricultural activities in Pakpanang.

    The Organization Operates

    There are several executive committees and subcommittees as follows:

    1.) Pakpanang River Basin Project Executive Committees

    2.) Pakpanang River Basin Project Subcommittees

    3.) Royal Irrigation Department Subcommittees

    4.) Pakpanang River Basin Public Relations Project Subcommittees

    5.) Pakpanang River Basin Agriculture System Subcommittees

    Characteristic of the project

    Pakpanang River Basin Project composes of four major components

    1.) Irrigation construction: The Royal Irrigation Department was assigned to

    be a project administrator, which budget is approximately 13,400,000,000 Thai baht. The project composes of various components which includes constructing water gates and flood gates to release and obstruct Pakpanang River and building ridges to separate fresh water and brine water.

    2.) Environmental Solution: Ministry of Science and Technology determines

    pollution control area; Department of Fisheries develops law and regulations about the shrimp farms and its location; Agriculture and Cooperative Society for Agriculture Bank supports special loans for farmers; other government sectors follow the same laws and regulations as well as checking ON on-going environmental issues.

    Results:

    • Eradicate weeds in natural channel

    • Build a pipe that treats the dirty water from shrimps markets

    • Construct a pipe that treats the dirty water from local community

    • Verify qualities of underground water, seawater, and soil

    • Monitor fishery resources around Pakpanang River area

    3.) Developing Agriculture

    Ministry of Science and Technology established the major policy

    as follows: improve quality and quantity of rice production; encourage integrated

    agriculture; organize shrimps farms and its locations; conserve soil, water, and other

    environment; and develop organizations for agriculture.

    Results:

    • Rice production increases

    • In-season rice farms increases

    • Out-of-season rice farms increases

    • Resuscitate shrimp industries

    • Improve integrated agriculture

    • Support other agricultural careers

    4.) Public Relations

    Pakpanang River Basin is a large project; therefore, public relations

    plays significant role to communicate between the king, officials, and the residents.

    Benefits

    1.) Protect the trespassing of the brine to agriculture land

    2.) Create fresh water resources

    3.) Diminish natural disasters

    4.) Eliminate the arguments between shrimp farmers and rice farmers

    5.) Reduce migration issues

    6.) Increase quality and quantity of agriculture product

    7.) Improve quality of life

    8.) Resuscitate overall Pakpanang’s ecology system

    In conclusion, Pakpanang River Basin Project is one of the three thousand

    projects that the king proposed in the country. This project is an effective way to

    create many agriculture and fishery careers and improve qualities of life. And with that, we can proudly say our beloved King is an intelligent, visionary,

    and charismatic leader.

  3. lol you just posted ur homework on here..i have been there too..hang in there and ask a teacher. good luck.

  4. TOO LONG!

  5. Dude.  That is too much to do.  Sorry.

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