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His Royal Pakpanang River Basin Development Project

Currently, Pakpanang has numerous physical, environmental, social, and quality of life issues. Pakpanang is not a prospered area like it was years ago, but Pakpanang is now desperately in need of resuscitation and development.

His Majesty the king has concerns with the several issues that have been impacted residents in “Pakpanang River Basin”. Pakpanang River basis covers large areas of Nakhon Sri Thammarat and nearby provinces includes Pakpanang, Chaoad, Ronpibon, Chiangyai, Hoachai, Julaporn, Mueng and some areas in Bangkanoon in Pattalong Province, as well as some areas in Ranod in Songkha province also affected by the issues.

In the past, the residents around Pakpanang River Basin were wealthy and the environment around the area was prospered both in fertile soil and river. Thereafter, there are various issues such as invading the reserved area, wood slitting, depleting water. Moreover, the Pakpanang River Basin has a large area that covered with sour water and acid soil that bad for agricultures. Therefore, many residents change their careers and migrant to work else where. As a consequence, Pakpanang is now one of the poorest regions in the country.

His Royal Initiative

His Majesty the king has an inspiration to improve quality of life and eliminate physical, environmental and social issues in the Pakpanang River Basin Area.

The following are some vital events of the project:

13 September, 2521 his majesty the king and consultants has began to diagnose the irrigation issues in Nakon Sri Thammarat. In 2524 the Royal Irrigation Department has begun to lay plans explore and design the faction carry to lead wood channel. 19-22 November, 2531 the Royal Irrigation Department created a project to facilitate southern resident whom impacted by natural catastrophe. After, His majesty the king has considered Pakpanang River Basin Project for a few years. 2 October 2536, his majesty the king gave a crow to executive committees about Pakpanang River Basin Project.

Answer 1

How about this?  Also I did not quite understand what you meant in the "vital events" section, so I did not comment.

Good luck!

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His Royal Pakpanang River Basin Development Project

Currently, Pakpanang has numerous physical, environmental, social, and quality of life issues. Years ago, Pakpanang was a prospered area for agricultures, but Pakpanang is now a desperate place in need of resuscitation and development.

His Majesty the king is concerned with several issues that affect the residents of “Pakpanang River Basin”. Pakpanang River Basin covers large areas of Nakhon Sri Thammarat and nearby provinces includes Pakpanang, Chaoad, Ronpibon, Chiangyai, Hoachai, Julaporn, Mueng and some areas in Bangkanoon in Pattalong Province, as well as some areas in Ranod in Songkha province.

In the past, the residents around Pakpanang River Basin were wealthy and the area was prospered both in fertile soil and river. After several environmental catastrophe such as invading the reserved area, wood slitting, and depleting water, the place is now covered with sour water and acid soil which unusable for agriculture purposes. As a result, many residents were forced to leave the area in search work else where. And as a consequence, Pakpanang is now one of the poorest regions in the country.

His Royal Initiative

His Majesty the king determines to improve quality of life and eliminate physical, environmental, and social issues in the Pakpanang River Basin area.

The following are some vital events of the project:

Answer 2

His Royal Pakpanang River Basin Development Project

     Currently, Pakpanang has numerous physical, environmental, social, and quality of life issues. Pakpanang is not a prospered area like it was years ago, but Pakpanang is now desperately in need of resuscitation and development.

     His Majesty the king has concerns with the several issues that have been impacted residents in “Pakpanang River Basin”. Pakpanang River basis covers large areas of Nakhon Sri Thammarat and nearby provinces includes Pakpanang, Chaoad, Ronpibon, Chiangyai, Hoachai, Julaporn, Mueng and some areas in Bangkanoon in Pattalong Province, as well as some areas in Ranod in Songkha province also affected by the issues.

     In the past, the residents around Pakpanang River Basin were wealthy and the environment around the area was prospered both in fertile soil and river. Thereafter, there are various issues such as invading the reserved area, wood slitting, depleting water. Moreover, the Pakpanang River Basin has a large area that covered with sour water and acid soil that bad for agricultures. Therefore, many residents change their careers and migrant to work else where. As a consequence, Pakpanang is now one of the poorest regions in the country.

His Royal Initiative

    

     His Majesty the king has an inspiration to improve quality of life and eliminate physical, environmental and social issues in the Pakpanang River Basin Area.

The following are some vital events of the project:

    

     13 September, 2521 his majesty the king and consultants has began to diagnose the irrigation issues in Nakon Sri Thammarat. In 2524 the Royal Irrigation Department has begun to lay plans explore and design the faction carry to lead wood channel. 19-22 November, 2531 the Royal Irrigation Department created a project to facilitate southern resident whom impacted by natural catastrophe. After, His majesty the king has considered Pakpanang River Basin Project for a few years. 2 October 2536, his majesty the king gave a crow to executive committees about Pakpanang River Basin Project.

All words spelled right.  Just need a little touch-up.

Answer 3

im sorry but i didn't read the whole thing but did notice that Pakpanang is mentioned a little to much

for example

...impacted residents in “Pakpanang River Basin”. Pakpanang River basis...

once you have already used Pakpanang River Basin try shortening the name... people will still know what your talking about

try

..impacted residents in “Pakpanang River Basin”. The River basis...