2 poems i had wrote?

Question

its 2 poems just wondering what u would thik of them

I think of you each morning

And dream of you each night

I think of you being in my arms

Kissin u on the neck

Then passionately kiss ur pretty pink lips

Feel so soft an oh so right

Your gentle touch

Makes everything right

An I just wanna spend all night

With u in my arms

Till the sun comes up

the rain trickles down

thoughts run through

im here thinkin of how to get to you

inside my chest my heart is breaking

I'm missing you so much

just want u to knoe how i feel

these feelings so strong and oh so true

how i like to be laying under the stars

my arms wrapped around you

kiss you softly

feel your gentle touch

there no were else i want to be

expect laying underneath the stars with you babe

Answer 1

Are you trying to get a girl?  Because if you are, then i think you might want to use something else.  Although the second one could pass.  the first one would make her think that you were really weird.

Answer 2

Well they are both so sweet

The first one is indeed of love

as well as reassurance

letting her know you think of her

and then you dream of her

Oh I am sure she will love this

having these feelings makes you feel right

The last two lines I am assuming you can and will

hold her till the sun comes up.  

Warm thoughts come when the rain trickles down

some sadness here because she is not there

and having this feeling breaks your heart

and you are missing her too.

Does she know about these poems.

I think you should read them to her

they both send a clear message

you will feel better and so will she.

Answer 3

Love poems, with nature... rain trickling down...Feelings so strong and oh so true...

Yes I like it.