topic:
attack or defend the following thesis statement-
With the exception of the differences in the date and culture (including technology, language, fashion, etc), the life of teenager in America during WWII is the same as teh life of a teenager during the War on Terrorism (War in Iraq).
Here's my intro paragraph:
“History doesn’t repeat itself, but it does rhyme.†(Twain) In a sense, the generation of teenagers that lived through World War II, rhymes harmoniously with those living through the War on Terrorism. The scenario is much the same. John Knowles’s novel A Separate Peace centers in on the teenage protagonist, Gene Forrester, as he tries to attain and maintain his own separate peace while WWII rages in Europe. In the very similarity that both generations lived through war, are collasal differences.
it's really raw. not edited at all. but any advice? ideas?
if you couldn't tell by the paragraph, i'm attacking the statement.
thanks in advance =]
ps: did i cite the quote right?
thanks in advance :)
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