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A Dark Poem in Iambic Tetrameter. What do you think?

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One brisk and blowing winter's day,

an ancient and disused padre

did shuffle down the sidewalk grey.

Long coat of black and collar white,

blue eyes asquint against the light,

each breath a fog fading from sight.

His pockets deep, damp hands within

now clutching tight the proof of Sin,

smooth surface cold against his skin.

His destination lies ahead:

The rectory and quick to bed

to pray for sleep to calm his dread.

But now the wind becomes a gale

and from the heavens stinging hail

pelts down upon his concrete trail.

As clouds above where once were none

blot all remaining trace of sun

the ancient preacher starts to run.

His graceless gait is without speed

and in the gloom he fails to heed

the slick of ice which does the deed.

The nuns will find him in the morn’

and too will find the shame he’s borne

once from his fingers guilt is torn.

For in his frozen grip they’ll see

the demons he had failed to flee

in little Johnny’s rosary.

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  1. "HI!"

    I love your poetry, the Pandora's box has been revealed.

    In a very thought out and structured poem.

    WELL DONE!  : )

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