A FOURTH poem.....would you believe it?!!??

Question

once

in a land far

away

lived a beautiful.......

pillow.

named mae

mae was no ordinary

bedding

pillow

she was actually

magical.

this is why:

she made her sleepers

have wonderful

dreams.

nothing was as it seems

this is why:

once upon a time there was a boy named fred.

now

back to the pillow-

it was cool.

the end.

Answer 1

Yes very interesting and nice little twist on the end-- I like that--good job !!

Answer 2

Vry wierd.

But i luv wierd soo keep doin wot u do.

Answer 3

um...well, nice subject. LOL. but it was funny at the end and a little bit unusual but very good overall.

Answer 4

i dont get it! but i'm not sure i'm supposed to...

Answer 5

hehe, nice and creative.

Answer 6

its... not very good, but ok