A Poem For Rhona: "One Such As You" - comments please?

Question

This is my first narration of a poem I have written, It took 6 takes to get it okay, I am a little insecure of my reading and wasn't sure I could pull it off, which is why my wife Rhona usually reads all my poems. I couldn't ask her to narrate a poem about her so I had to do it myself.

please be gentle!!!

Answer 1

Quite hard to follow, but over all well writtena and a great deleverence. Well done.

Answer 2

That's beautiful. The words came up a bit fast though and was a bit hard to read - sorry to be critical. Your wife is a lucky lady.

Answer 3

WONDERFULL

GREAT

Answer 4

Wow... that was .. wonderful!

Answer 5

you are a tender girl

Answer 6

Kudos to you Silver Tongue.  Your tribute to your wife was in one word beautiful.

I loved the video, the end was very fitting.  I bet your wife was over the moon with it.

For the narration, you have a voice that's easy to listen to, no problem there.  As others have said, some of the lines come up and disappear too quickly to follow which is a bit distracting.  That's my only criticism.

Very welldone.  Thanks for sharing it with us.