~*A Special Memoir*~?

Question

~*A Special Memoir*~

Random thoughts for those who read...

~*Memoirs of a Wingless Angel*~

Where doth the beauty in my heart emerge from? I seem to wonder... since my heart is filled with sullen memories, and my mind bears morose thoughts...

It springs up from my spirit as an underground geyser bursting into the sun's delight. Perhaps, beauty is found in the most sullen of things...

A rose, what a creature it is... more sorrowful than any, for a single rose is more beautiful than a dozen put together... And in solitude and lonesome silence, there is sorrow...

~*WinglessAngel*~

Answer 1

Sorry to appear ignorant -is this yours, or is it something you admire and you want us to share?

The first sentence doesn't seem right to me.

It uses the archaic 'doth' but ends with a preposition.  I don't think that would be the case.

It should be 'From whence doth the beauty of my heart emerge?

And I know in poetry, everything goes, but calling a Rose, a creature - mm, no.  How about A rose, what an enigma it is (or summat)

The rest works really well, whoever wrote it I am impressed

Answer 2

In sadness, there is happiness.

I have a quote, that is mine, I wrote it.

Through love, you will find hope.

Through hope, you will find life.

Through life, you will find love.

As they say life is indeed a circle.

Nothing is left out, nothing is ever missed.

A purpose for everything.

It is when we are at out lowest, that we see love in the world.

Love, is beauty.

Sadness, is just happiness without a smile.

Answer 3

im speechles!! (thats a good thing!! lol)

Answer 4

it's is beautifull,,,you are the rose,,,,,getting ready to burst in to the sun light,,,I dont no how much more your heart can hold,,,you,, want to no,, what it feels like to,feel the love you give and have  with in ,,