A True Friendship is a name of a song I wrote and I was wondering what my fellow christian thought of it?

Question

Verse 1

It's so very hard to find

A true friendship that will never die

There's a friend who won't ever us behind

His love will forever bind the tie

It's a true friendship that we need (Chorus)

that friendship that will never leave

We need Jesus to be that friend

Because with Him we'll know no end

Verse 2

Jesus died for our sins

so we can be forever with Him

All we need to do is

Confess our sins and ask him in

Chorus

Verse 3

Life can be so very hard

To know that difference between right and wrong

Jesus always cares and loves to give us a hand

And that's why we sing this song

Chorus

Verse 4

Nothing can ever remove us

From our Father's loving hand

No matter what we do or say

He shows us his love everyday

Chorus

Answer 1

That's music to my Heart

Answer 2

Awful.

Answer 3

it sounds like a great and true song. im sure other people will like it also.

Answer 4

ewwwww.....

Answer 5

The chorus includes the phrase "Know no end". That's got to be changed for a start...

Answer 6

i think it's nice.i wish you had written the solfas. i could tab it for you...

Answer 7

EW

Answer 8

I'm not a follower of religion, but I do believe in Christ. The song is pretty good but needs work. That's just my opinion. Like:

It's so very hard to find

A true friendship that will never die

I would change to:

It's so very hard to find

A friendship like yours and mine/ or A true friendship that's so kind.

There's a few more things that I would change. But it's a great start.