A cruel poem for your perusal, comments?

Question

Bwa-Ha-Ha!

I at last had the upper hand

And my opponent landed in the sand

Bwa-Ha-Ha he said to me

As his foot caught behind my knee

Down I fell and tumbled over

Unable, it seemed, to recover

But I reached out and took his arm

Twisting it to his alarm

Bwa-Ha-Ha yourself said I

Now prepare yourself to die

Further to the ground I crushed him

Where he felt my power grim

As he choked on dirt he ate

And bemoaned his awful fate.

Answer 1

And the fight was for Gold or Bronze???

Answer 2

How can I disagree??

It is a dog-eat-dog world!

Bravo , your poem is sentimental, sensitive, perfect to be read under the moonlight by the seashore ...

Answer 3

I guess you're very competitive. Bwa-ha-ha!

Answer 4

LIfe is a battle, I know.

The true is very simple. You should never give up.

Every day is a new day and all the challenges are here to face you.

What's the answer? Never say no, and face the enemy.

At  the end, you know that you, only you are your major opponent.

When the alarm sounds, be ready for another fight.

Fight after fight, even tough tired and hurt, you will win the battle.

I hope so!

Don't forget. Wounds can be cured.

Kep your light bright forever!

Answer 5

Looks like you won the wrestling match with temptation!

This took three readings, I hope I'm somewhere close to its real meaning..

Answer 6

The struggle never ends. Your opponent is always ready to rise again.You expressed your preliminary struggle very graphically and poetically.

Answer 7

this is really a great poem. i love the words and ur expresiions. i got the message u were conveying too. not all of it but some. overconfidencs, winners, losers. this is a meaningful poem and i love the choice of words. it looks simple but it would have been difficult at  the same time to canvey such a message and choose rhyming words too. wh ever wrote this has talent.