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A haiku about apple, the red cow. feedback please? :)

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Posted 4 haikus on my blog today. Could I ask for your feedback on this particular one?

apple the red cow, haiku

4 year old red cow

sold for a million dollars -

not just medium rare

Thanks. :) If you'd also like to check out the other 3, they're on:

http://currenteventshaikus.blogspot.com/

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  1. I really like it, and it has strong meaning.  

    I would consider writing the word "four" instead of using the number, it'll look a little more professional.  

    Good job.  Poetry is amazing. I can't wait to look at your blog.

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