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A haiku on the montauk monster. Could I please ask for feedback?

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Churned out 12 haikus for my blog. Could I ask for feedback on this particular one? Thanks. :)

the montauk monster

misshapen and dead

washed up on a montauk beach -

viral marketing

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  1. It's good!

    I completely agree that it's viral marketing, or some sort of practical joke. I'm into the turtle without shell theory, but the more I think about it, the more it looks like a decomposed dog :'(


  2. Very good. I agree with the people who say it is a sea turtle minus its shell.

  3. Good form. I am very familiar with Montauk beaches.

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