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A little sad poem. but what do you think?

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He has gone,

Departed from this world,

They say,

Hes gone to a better place.

But how come i only know this feeling of misery.

His touch onto this hollow world,

Only leaves a shallow recall,

His abysmal eyes of hazel,

Impale into my soul.

His smile would gleam

In mere shadow

Why did this soul need to escape

And his name is like a bell,

Wrapped arouund my tormented heart,

And whenever the pain strikes.

The bell gently strokes back and forth

"Ilko, Ilko, Ilko, Ilko"

Only to leave shoal echoes

Prancing through out this world.

Tears will stroll down tattered faces,

The journey isn't distant,

Until lashed by an angel

He sees our tears,

He hears his name.

He doesn't visit anymore.

Because time will never destroy a heart,

If he drops by, it will give us hope.

Maybe he shall once again promenade

Onto this earth,

Maybe he will get the rose

I gently laid onto his casket.

"Ilko, Ilko, Ilko, Ilko"

The heart drums.

Tears stroll down my rose cheeks,

Ilko, you have gone to a better place.

You hear your name. You see my tears.

I miss you. I will remember you.

I love you.

"Ilko, Ilko."

The pain slashes back.

Hes in a better place.

"Ilko" MY heart will continue to thump.

But you are in a better place.

R.I.P Ilko 25/05/08

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  1. Wonderful story! I am so sorry about your friend! The poem showed true emotion, and I felt as if I was feeling your sorrow.   I love "Tears stroll down my rose cheeks,

    Ilko, you have gone to a better place.

    You hear your name. You see my tears.

    I miss you. I will remember you.

    I love you."

    That really struck deep. I hope he is watching you now. I am sure he would be proud.


  2. I'm sorry about your friend, it's a good poem and memory of him. You may want to fix the 25/05/08.

  3. That is indeed sad

    it talks about someone who died

    according to you he was someone special

    You are feeling the misery because

    there are reminders

    of the times you had with the person who died

    He misses you remember you

    also

    and even though he is gone

    his love for you will not die

    and you will not forget him either

    The joys and memories you two had was pleasure

    now they will be ones you treasure.  

    what you are going through is pain

    One day you will get together with him again

  4. Nice peom. You use a lot of delicate and beautiful words here. They convey a sense of true and deep feelings from you and the relationship between you and your friend. Your use of figurative language is good too!

  5. im sorry you lost a friend

    i like your poem :)

    answer mine?

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