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A love poem!?!? is it good, about long distance relationship?

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I feel so trapped from where I stand

I finally came across a soul

That understands as well as I

But from miles away there is no point

You see my moon, you see my stars

We see together but not as one

For why did god let us meet

Only to find we can never touch

Why did I just have to say hi

For it to go on how it did

We watched together as chemistry formed

Now we realize what is here

A country apart, hearts so stubborn

Making their way in between us two

We stay up till dawn, so quiet so still

I still just wish I could walk with you

On the beach, the sunset in the horizon

Just staring into you deeply, in those eyes

I want to be where I can just kiss you

But we can not make a move

For are hearts are still to young and gentle

But the wait is worthwhile

I will just live on my life, dreaming of you

Until the day comes, to where I can love you

~juju

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  1. that was GOOD! Really passionate. And easy to understand, i liked that!


  2. i luv it!!!

    its exactly wat im goin thru

    i miss him!! lol

    ya its great

  3. no. i think it sucks.

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