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A new Poem; would you please critique?Also any suggestions for a title please

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Today is the start of a brand a new beginning

a reason for living

my destiny solved

No more prescriptions

I rise from depression

a change of direction

that I need to evolve

Happiness ain’t hard

it’s a new found sensation

with mind over matter

my fears start to fade

I now see through the chaos

of the everyday dreamers

to whom life is a prison

without chance of parole

To them there’s no reason,

no neat explanation

why the bubble they’re in

is becoming so small

But a free mind can save them

no need for salvation

with this new way of thinking

we will reach all our goals

With a positive reaction

to all life’s distractions

we’ll be ready and able

when destiny calls

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  1. great poem  i luv it

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