A new poem..feedback plz?

Question

Broken Promises...

Yesterday's goals, dim memories.

Dark saddened eyes, blurring with tears.

Painful scars borne; Love's history.

Futures crumble when doubt appears.

No brightly lit hope envisioned,

When following after harsh words.

Hurt soul splits in twain, partitioned.

Swooned by appeal - when numbness lured.

Apologies made, never bought.

Price paid turned out far too costly.

Though never known what would be wrought -

Must walk into the night softly.

One wish, only to be released.

Granted - now receive this token.

Words written in rhyme, love's deceased.

When promises made . . . were broken.

Answer 1

Yes, this one works.  Nice job.

Answer 2

you know yesterday I found out that my boyfriend cheated and i d**n near wanted to kill myself but than i read you poem and desided not to be so greedy but to note that this stuff happens to everyone so this poem was inspirital to me keep righting and if you could write one for me cause I am no good at that. My best friend has been there the most for me and I just need something to make her feel appricated if you know what I mean..... so my email is [e-mail]  if you could do that for me that would be great thanks and I will vote for you and your poem if you deside to enter it

Answer 3

This is indeed about any promises,

that were broken

as well as dreams shattered

First line Yesterday's goals

I would have said history

but I see you already have love's history

Broken promises can be devastating

This can also result in lack of communication

and trust.

I like the line apologies made never bought

here this is because it never came from the heart

and to mean

Your poem said it when promises made... were broken