A new poem of mine, Seasons. Feedback?

Question

Burning fierce, alive, entrancing,

leaping embers ever dancing

with the energy I seek;

alone, the winter is long and bleak-

I'll not survive without you.

Something peaceful, cool, refreshing,

from above, a gracious blessing

that I would stay afloat;

alone, the summer scorched my throat-

I'll not survive without you.

Through the skies, erratic flying,

remind me that not all is dying

and I am not alone

when autumn chills me to the bone;

I'll not survive without you.

Flowers bloom and life is thriving,

hatred dies and love reviving;

my very soul is free!

When I'm in doubt, the spring reminds me

I'll not survive without you.

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whatcha think? Any questions, comments, concerns, compliments, insults, or interpretations? Any and all feedback is appreciated.

Answer 1

I have no intention on insulting your poetry

I like how each part is written out.  

For example the winter

it would talk about warmth by burning

winters are long

Summer is the opposite

it is very hot out

so on has to replace their fluids

the thought of drinking lemonade

it an idea

The autumn the leaves start to change colors

this beauty is of red brown yellow leaves

as they fall to the ground.

The weather starts to be come cold

because days are shorter

Spring is the melting of snow

preparing for the work in the garden

thoughts of planting flowers and

vegetables

Answer 2

Yes!!!!!  I love, love, love, love, love this poem!  Great balance, great ending, good rythm.  Very fun to read.

Answer 3

Dr Seuss would be proud.

Answer 4

its good!