A new poem of mine. I want to live and I want to love...

Question

Would you wake up if you could?

Or would you rather sleep?

Do you dream of a world where you are happy?

Disappointed the next day when you wake up and the dream was just a dream

I just want my dreams to come true

Can you ensure that they will?

If I believe

If I ask

Will I become

What I crave to become?

Give me all the instructions

On how to live a life

Step-by-step

So I won't lose my way and fall down

Tell me all the things I need to know

And how to start

Because I am jealous again

Of all that people that live their lives

Answer 1

Close your eyes and smell a rose,

Let the scent reach to your toes,

Open your eyes to see the sun

This world's for you, now go have fun!

Seriously, you have the same right to happiness as anyone else so go out today and Do something that will be a memory you smile about in the future.

Tomorrow, do it again.

Repeat as necessary.

Dr Fog.

Answer 2

Great Poem!!!  Here is my response to you:

Believe when no one else believes

Live even when its hard to live

Be who you want to be

Focus on your dreams....

Like a baby just learning how to walk, you will stumble and fall, making mistakes in your journey through life but when that happens -

gather the inner strength to get up....

Learn to love yourself

Be happy with who you are

Observe, listen and learn and......

You can create the life you want to enjoy because it all starts with a Dream : )

Answer 3

Its great! and so differant!

Answer 4

it's a nice poem ^^