A new poem......?

Question

BORED! POEM!

Im still here

in the same old place

Its now i fear

I will see the same old face

I will be stuck in this place

always and forever

Its all empty space

I will get outta here never

Life is bland

and boring space

I cant take a stand

im in my place

Answer 1

i think your poem is good- i just think you use the word place too much -  but it was still good. :)

I love the first verse tho - :) guess you are bored - good luck on writing- post some more!! :)