A new poem up for dissection?

Question

title: DON'T

don't love me,

i've got no money.

don't leave me,

i'll get too lonely.

don't touch me,

i'm not feeling friendly.

don't forget me.

just don't, please.

Answer 1

you could have done alot better on this, but i do like it.  it sounds like an abused child speaking.(almost)

Answer 2

That is bloody brilliant. I love it. You really have such an evocative talent. Thank you!

Answer 3

i say horrid no concept what soever

Answer 4

Short and pointed. It pushes away just as it invites in. Very good.