A penny for your thoughts...haikus I wrote?

Question

How strange, innocence.

A flutter of breath, and her

Sweet hands curled in sleep.

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Notes scream through silence

Guitars claw the air with chords

The piano sighs

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Darkness, like sorrow

Hollow eyes and shattered dreams

This will destroy you

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Your thoughts on any of these?

Answer 1

The first was my favorite, one of the goals of any sort of haiku, traditional or western, is to say a lot in few lines. 'sweet hands curled in sleep' says so much, with such vivid imagery. Its just lovely.

Oh! and the plural of haiku, is haiku... I know not a big deal, but I found it interesting, perhaps you will too.

Answer 2

Very Good!!!

Answer 3

I like the 1st one okay... I'm not too fond of the 2nd... but I really really enjoyed the 3rd.

All in all I must say.. Well Done!