A poem, hope you like it?

Question

The World Like Man.

by Dag Drahmr

First it crawls,

.........it walks,

.........it runs,

trial and error,

it learns by mistakes.

Now it is grown,

.........it lies,

.........it cheats,

.........it twists the facts,

all to get what it wants.

Is that not human?

Answer 1

That's really depressing to think this is a representation of all humanity.  The liars and cheats - are in the minority - I hope. If "man" learned by his mistakes before - what is not to say - that he will continue to do so ♥

Answer 2

Somewhere between the ying and yang things go awry! lol  Good wry observation.

Answer 3

Is this our Republic...yes?

Answer 4

i like it

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Answer 5

More of personification ! its good . I like the deep rooted philosophy in it! keep up

Answer 6

Wasn't it stated by some one, people are only as good as

their goverment.

I liked your poem!

Answer 7

Coop,

I like this poem

the first paragraph reminds

me of a baby because

first it crawls

walks

runs

Life is about trial and error

it is about learning from mistakes.

This is human

Growing up

I sense a relationship or marriage

gone sour

because of the lies

cheating

In cheating things get twisted

because of denial

This hurt all because the person get all he wants

Thiis is not right or human.

Answer 8

I like it. Kudos.

Answer 9

Pretty good. Better than mine lol.

Answer 10

The world circles

in twisted orbit

that's a fact.