A poem I wrote? Seems all too true?

Question

She can’t change the world.

She is limited only by her looks.

Because she is popular girl,

She cannot be caught with books.

She must make a dumb façade;

Hide the thoughts that want to shine.

Every day she hates her life,

But most still think it fine.

They don’t see it’s torture,

To hide these brilliant notions.

She knows she must be an airhead,

But only knows the motions.

She can’t really be so dim;

But inside her thoughts are curled.

She knows that this much is true:

She won’t change the world.

I know, rhyme scheme is a little unoriginal.

Answer 1

Yea waste a bunch of money getting this train wreck of words published and see what happens when no one buys it.  I pity the popular people it's so sad and I cry for them daily.  What an airhead.......!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 2

I think its very good, but hey what do I know.

Don't underestimate the benefits of popularity, its hard to enjoy yourself without good mates.

Answer 3

That was great! It has a simple rythem and you didn't tyr to sway us with fancy words, it was just the cold hard truth the way you see it.

Answer 4

that was really good!but also so true!i think you should publish because its so good!=]

Answer 5

this poem is really good

Answer 6

Really good poem, and sadly, too true.

The pressure to be popular now-a-days is crazy.