A poem I wrote... help me complete the last line?

Question

Girls in white dresses would dance through the fields

picking armfuls of daisies, a portrait of youth.

Soldiers in uniform now march through the fields

blood staining the little white flowers in bloom.

Girls in black dresses ____ through the fields

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I can't think of a graceful way to word the girls being part of the funerals for the soldiers, following the caskets or something. Can someone help me out?

Answer 1

sympathize through the field

Answer 2

Blood stains little white flowers in bloom

girls in black dresses grieve tears through the fields

mourn

scream

Answer 3

Girls in black dresses weep through the fields

Shadowing the high held caskets of soldiers.

I hope this helps!

Answer 4

Girls in black dresses trudge through the fields

the daises now withered, a portrait of sorrow.

Answer 5

Girls in black dresses transcend through the fields

...surrounding their lost lovers in caskets.

sorry.. I cannot do justice to your writing but I could stop myself from adding a word and a thought... for you to twist about and play with.. maybe inspire you to finish it finally..

it will come together for you well enough once you define what you are portraying... perhaps in the wee hours of the morning when your brain suddenly wakens with an idea...

Answer 6

Girls in black dresses glide through the fields

Spreading petals of roses upon the graven ground ♥

Answer 7

mourn thruough the fields

Answer 8

Mourn throught the fields

Wilting the poor daisies who once dance with youth or Wilting the flowers who've caught in their clutch.

Something like that, lol/

Good Luck

Answer 9

Girls in black dresses:

mournfully graze

sullenly dance

through the fields

Answer 10

Girls in white dresses would dance through the fields

picking armfuls of daisies, a portrait of youth.

Soldiers in uniform now march through the fields

blood staining the little white flowers in bloom.

Girls in black dresses flew through the fields

to see their loves at strenght and real.

Answer 11

Girls in black dresses,

mournfully tread,

through out the fields,where

soldiers lay ....Dead!

Answer 12

"pass over hallowed ground, shedding their tears."

I hope it helps you on your way.

I would also suggest you change "little" to something like "delicate"

Answer 13

symbolize death on the feilds.

Answer 14

mourn?

Answer 15

march through the feilds

Answer 16

Move through the fields

Armful of prayers, with somber faces.

Meh, hope I helped, stay strong.

Answer 17

Girls in white dresses would dance through the fields

picking armfuls of daisies, a portrait of youth.

Soldiers in uniform now march through the fields

blood staining the little white flowers in bloom.

Girls in black dresses stride through the fields

Watching the soldiers be placed in the field.

Answer 18

mourn through the fields