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A poem about a doggie bath.?

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Penumbra is going to have his bath,

No..!!STOP!! Doggie.! Doggie! Please don't bite!

Your body is full of fleas and lice,

OUCH!!! Well fine smelly! No bone for tonight!

P/S: And you sleep outside!

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  1. Your poem is okay, but it reads a little awkwardly because of all the internal stops.  Cute concept and the P.S. is a nice touch.


  2. thats a great poem!

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