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A poem about a place, just a house,but more, Comments?

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DOWN HOME

A simple house of three rooms,

A pantry and enclosed back porch.

Beside the front door Pampas grass

Spider ladies, red salvia,

Black eyed Susans and nasturtiums

Bank the front, on the side

Castor bean and flowering quince.

Behind there is a garden

With sweet corn, tomatoes and kale,

Mustard greens, beets, and turnips

Poke weed that yields both ink

And poke salat in the spring

There is also a place where

The razor back hogs are slopped

That are also allowed to roam

The hickory woods beyond.

A brick lined well was

Twenty feet below the house

With a bucket on a rope

Sitting on the cover of the well.

Fresh water, the sweetest

Ever I drank was in a stainless

Steel bucket on the porch

With a ladle for drinking,

Cooking and washing,

A porcelained basin sat

On a bench with towel

And brown home-made soap

For washing both hands and dishes.

The water with food from plates

And leftovers was thrown

To slop the hogs, from which

We got home cured bacon

And country ham

A sixteen pound slab

Was in the ice box,

Black rind still attached

Next to a glass quart of milk

With standing cream

Bought daily along with

Dozen eggs and Mellow Creme

Donuts and fluffy white bread.

A kerosene three burnered stove

That lit with explosive force

Served to cook, though no meals

Were served, it was simply set out

For any who were hungry

Along with a gallon of iced tea

In the middle of the kitchen table

Sweetened and with lemon slices

For guests who came and went.

In the kitchen clutter there were

Glasses of jams, jellies, and preserves,

A gallon jar of pickles, spiced apples

Pickled pigs' feet, hard summer sausage

Head cheese and a crock of k***t.

Apple slices and stringed beans

Hung to dry alongside herbs,

Dishes were few and washed frequently

As were pots and pans.

A large coffee pot on the stove

Boiled coffee. grounds settled with

A whole raw egg, shell and all.

It also heated water for washing.

The pantry also served

As a place to shave with basin

And mirror no bigger than a face,

It too held the ten gallon

Galvanized square tub

For Saturday baths in the back yard,

Towels and clothes spread out

On the poke and sassafras.

Pot-bellied coal stove

With isinglass windows

Heated the house, kindled by

Newspaper from the stacks

On the back porch next to

The cases of beer in bottles.

The bedroom held a double bed

And dresser, as well as a walk in closet,

Other sleepers were accommodated on

A couch in the front room, or pallets

Of quilts on the floor, there were

Two overstuffed chairs to sit and chat

A cherry drop leaf table and end table

Both held kerosene lamps for reading

© ALBERT K. JUNGERS FEBRUARY 2, 2008, ALL RIGHTS RESERVED.

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  1. How lovely, indeed!  You transported me back to my grandfather's home in Kentucky...which, fortunately, after 150 years...stands...proud and tall.

    Thank you for the memories!


  2. Great images and history here.  You have material for a number of poems.  The length here hurts the shine.  Still a great read.

  3. Hey dude...I can't says I have read a poem before....well on here anyway about a house!

    I think it's nice and very descriptive.....gives me and insight into your own growing up and paints a perfect picture of the house!

    Keep writing!

  4. As I have said before I find your style tedious but the subject matter interested me (I am a hillbilly at heart,) and I like your word use. If the subject matter were different I would find it unreadable.

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