A poem about guitar hero lol read&comment?

Question

green button

red button

simultaneous

yellow blue orange

working my fingers down the fret

strumming my heart away

score rising

fulfilling the rock meter

yes!

my shout of victory!

lifting the guitar into the air

activating star power

the crowd goes wild!

one hundred note streak,

i'm on a roll.

wait,

what's that?

approaching the screen?

hammer ons?!

no,

it couldn't be!

alas,

it is.

i'm working feverishly

trying to hit the correct key.

and the meter hits red,

as i get booed.

its too late

for redemption now.

my dreams are torn

my heart is crushed.

d@mn you guitar hero.

Answer 1

Thats good! Nice job! You should be a poet!

Answer 2

haha thats pretty good

Answer 3

sounds like you need toractice some more on easy my man. : )

Answer 4

haha yea rock band is better

Answer 5

haha! I LOVE it!

Answer 6

heh...

Answer 7

haha very nice ;)

Answer 8

Sweet!

Answer 9

well i think its great i loved it!!! i cant make-up poems i suck buy u rock!!

Answer 10

Make it rhyme more, and its OKAY

Answer 11

its very good and creative but it doesint ryme

Answer 12

It;s creative dear. I mean, you can't really say that isn't poetry, because that's what art is. Who says an piece of work, is art. If a dot on a peice of paper is a masterpeice in the art devision,

then this is true, beautiful, magnifiacnly written peotry.

Answer 13

Nice :)

Answer 14

it is OK keep working on it you can do it

Answer 15

wow thats exellent you are auesome and plus its soooo fun. great job.

Answer 16

somebody has a lot of time on their hands. no but this is actually pretty good

Answer 17

lol  I loved it. Very creative choice for a poem!