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A poem about ideals, may I have your comments?

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The World of Heaven and h**l

In the World of Heaven and h**l

Everythng is always appropriate and well

For everything is parallel

And nothing is diffferent that we can tell

Our own parallel is the only one we see

In it are only folk like you and me

This is Heaven so we perfectly agree!

Not everyone's as perfect as we

We're permitted the illusion of a parallel to see,

h**l where everyone else is sent to dwell.

By Jihad, Crusade, Satyagraha,

Perfect Dharma we strive (according to belief)

To save or victoriously quell the Infidel

Relieving them of life or ignorant grief,

Only on this particular string,

They likewise are doing.

This is a world that's ideal.

A world also expressed in need

The necessary parallel of greed,

Selflessness, and sharing that is real,

Brotherhood in place of bigotry.

I'm sure that there's a string,

Parallel with all others, yet free

Where angels gather and together bring

The blessings and advances

From a Universe of chances

Humanity at last in diversity

Showing each other in and by love

The blessed, beautiful, warm, and smiling Face of God above.

© July 17, 2008 Albert K. Jungers All rights reserved

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  1. This one demonstrates polished skills and focused thoughts, a fine place for poetry to grow and flourish.


  2. What TD said!

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