A poem about my granddaughter?

Question

Ja-Zara Destiny

By Semper Fi Reborn

You are a beautiful rose.

Having bloomed from love,

Into loveliness.

Innocence your cloak.

Purity your hat.

I thank Almighty God for this miracle,

Of blessings poured into one little girl.

A gift you are for my little girl, your mother.

How it pleases me to see you both

Share a special bond.

How my daughter smiles at her daughter,

Is not mockable,

But remarkable.

The silent music in your smiles

Strikes a chord in my heart.

You wield so much power over us,

Through every sound,

Smile,

Or cry, we are at your mercy.

I just had to say,

What you already know.

Grandpa loves you Ja-Zara.

Answer 1

How lovely! How lovely! This is so beautifully written.....so beautifully written...and dear Semper, you are a blessed father and ever so blessed a grandfather...

Answer 2

wonderful Semper.!!

Answer 3

You speak for all loving doting grand parents, There is something

about granddaughter's that brings out the most gentle feelings in a

grand father, Both my Dad, father-in-law, and then later my husband,

amazed me at how mellow they were with their granddaughters.

Kudos

Answer 4

You are a sweetheart in every sense of the word!

Blessings to you and yours!

I'm looking forward to those grand babies...SOME day!

Answer 5

I know exactly what you mean, my granddaughter Emmy is my heart as Ja-Zara is yours.  Beautifully penned thoughts and love!

Congratulations on the newest branch of your family tree!

Answer 6

An ode from a father to his progeny, how wonderful, my grandfather was a great man, of Lordship and remowned in diplomacy. The greatest compliment I received was from an elder who remarked how like him I was in my ability to weave words and bring peace simply with words and presence....

Stature immense, at whose knee learnt of the world

A comforting formidable presence within

A world of turbulence and dangers amany

Father, Grandfather, a towering colossus

A might man of many colours and how adored

All stand aside and awe at hi ethereal splendor

This great and noble man of majesty and laud

To applaud his each utterance, and swoon at his laughter

His heart laugh resonating as a little one held close

To a broad breast of great might, a respite from the turmoil.

They talk of him, his magnificent awe, so adored

By the throng surrounding him, and he is gone

Decades passed and reminisce of his exploits

And yes, life grows and the world changes, the Godly Man.

Grandfather ….

Answer 7

I now know what I will never know.....TY SF

Answer 8

Very well done = )

Answer 9

This is mushy done right!  Be proud and gloat! Gloat is good in this situation.

Answer 10

I admire your expression of love for your grand daughter.

,,,,,,an angel in disguise I will wager..

Answer 11

This is a great poem, and my favorite line is the most powerful line of all: Grandpa loves you Ja-Zara.

Answer 12

Hello, Grandpa,

if you look real close,

you will find yourself

wrapped, quite firmly,

'round a tiny finger.

Isn't it just to grand,

to be a grandparent.

Thank you for sharing. It's really touching. Beautiful name.

God bless. <><

Answer 13

Through every sound,

Smile,

Or cry, we are under your mercy.

That alone, says a lot. Very beautiful!

Answer 14

Grandchildren are a good reason for us to live.  They bring a freshness and a new hope.  Thank you, I feel the same way about my little Katydid.