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A poem about my undying love?

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By Semper Fi Reborn

I've lived with her

For 23 years

I couldn't live without her

For 23 seconds

I wasn't worth 23 cents

When we met

She made me feel like

23 billion dollars

I may not know what life has in store

But I know

Next year's ode will be 24!

Hey, yesterday was our anniversary so I can be corny a bit right?

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Aww...that's sweet. I love the last three lines.
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!Happy Anniversary! :)

and that is a wonderful poem for such a wonderful day .....
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((((((Semper))))))

You know how much I love your beautiful expressions of faith and love.

Once again, perfection.

God bless you sweetie!
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Happy anniversary to you both. You are blessed with this kind of love.
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Now Semper - as punishment you will write 23 times on a blackboard "I share with you the love in my soull"

Nah forget it, we already get THAT message.

Beautiful. Congrats on you happiness and may you enjoy it way beyond another 23 years.
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Perfect.

When it comes to those we love, there is no such thing as corny.
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Alright Michael Jordan, we see the love, but billions? Why not trillions? lol Happy Anniversary again.
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Such a love is priceless and inspiring. Happy anniversary. You have a way of writing transcendent poems very simply. I believe it is because you write from the heart. I appreciate this very much. Thank you.
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Beautiful :)

Again, congratulations!! :)
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"Hi!",

That is bloody brilliant.

I loved this poem.

Nicely done....

"Happy Anniversary!"

Cheers : )

P.S: It's nort corney at all.

She will love it andtotally

' LOVE YOU!' : )

If only my husband would write me something like that. Sweet and FUNNY!

well done!

Cheers : )
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Awww thats sweet semper, happy anniversary to you both, 23 years is a long time, you two must be very happy, that is a match made in heaven!!!!
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I hope your giving her a copy of your poem!!!!

I think its so sweet and romantic that you can write about your love like this.Wish my man wrote things for me corny or not.
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It's precious and not corny at all. Love like this is never corny.

Congradulations again and again :)
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Was going to say happy anniversary 23 times --it will take up too much room! Nice to hear that after all those years you still love the person you are with, and so sweet that you have shown us your heart Cheers!!

Happy Happy Anniversary!!
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A beautiful, loving, grateful poem to your beloved. Methinks you are smitten :-) Happy Anniversary.
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Aww, she is very lucky! How adorable and sweet are you?!?

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Awwwww! Ya big Sweetie!

Again, Happy Anniversary!
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you couldn't be any more sweet and romantic if you tried. Do you have a brother?
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A bit corny--maybe, but how corny is it to express how much someone means to you.
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