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A poem about the human virus, would you please critique?

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Super-Natural

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Bird on a blast of coke

Clear amid all the smoke

Our mutual gaze slows down time

Pass judgment on friend of foe

Ignorant to secrets you hide

Ignorance and bliss as you fly

Maturing our minds is a crime

When slapped and spat on from high

Curiosity sought evolution

Fungus offered solutions

Awareness, a gained compromise

Gave meaning to good and gruesome

Talk spheres to stick men on paper

Old man takes a child and rapes her

The victims are never the wise

Wake now or be put to sleep later

Empowered when blood is spilled

Demons confused with your guilt

Everything returning full circle

When identical life is built

Adolescent humanity grows

Respect and unity flows

Mother is eternally fertile

As only God and I know

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  1. This poem too realistically feels that evrything present is dark and bleak . The present human being a homosapien is a virus who lives  and feeds on thers. Is everthing moving towards a precipice ? But here the poet comes to our rescue and says categorically,' No.'

    He says in the last stanza that the adolescent humanity finally grows. A respect for each other  and unity comes between all of us ; that we arenot content to be the virus that we were. After all the Mother earth is eternally fertile , she bears the burden of everybody and feeds them . A new direction and impetus is given by God as planned . As was already known to the poet.

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