A poem about the human virus, would you please critique

Question

Super-Natural

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Bird on a blast of coke

Clear amid all the smoke

Our mutual gaze slows down time

Pass judgment on friend of foe

Ignorant to secrets you hide

Ignorance and bliss as you fly

Maturing our minds is a crime

When slapped and spat on from high

Curiosity sought evolution

Fungus offered solutions

Awareness, a gained compromise

Gave meaning to good and gruesome

Talk spheres to stick men on paper

Old man takes a child and rapes her

The victims are never the wise

Wake now or be put to sleep later

Empowered when blood is spilled

Demons confused with your guilt

Everything returning full circle

When identical life is built

Adolescent humanity grows

Respect and unity flows

Mother is eternally fertile

As only God and I know

Answer 1

Yes, mankind is a virus feeding upon itself and an endless cycle.  A virus seemingly immune to any type of cure.  Your words  are dark, but also serve as a reminder that if we are to eventually change, we must begin by recognizing and coming to grips with this.  Your last two stanzas to me were exceptionally strong.  My compliments.

Answer 2

awesome...you could sell that to a band or something

Answer 3

This is compiled insanity,

a gruesome reality,

behind the humanity,

we are all slaves.

Sights are borken,

we are lost in destruction,

no room for anything but production,

and all is gray.

This poem is just f'ed up.