A poem any good.?

Question

Don't let childhood wonder

fade away,

remember that day.

That day on weathered sands

an ice cream dripping,

through sand castled hands.

Your innocence

not a thought of mind,

just a child

enjoying time.

Bobby Jo

my best friend,

wanted the day

to never end.

For young in years

he could forsee,

this day, was the best

it was ever going to be.

Answer 1

Thats dead good!!! =]

Answer 2

WOW! you really made me think as I read it.  I love this poem, thanks for showing it to me, I love poetry and i can see that u do, too!  I think it was a great poem that has alot of meaning in it!  Thanx for sharing!         IT'S GREAT!!!

Answer 3

Poor sod, a day on the beach at Padstow the highlight of a wasted life.

Would look a lot different after a Gallon of Newcastle brown ale

Answer 4

I think that you,

'Ent a bad poet,

That you are true,

And if you do not limit,

The amount of practice you do,

You will definetly become a great poet.

Answer 5

That was great.. takes you back :') xx

Answer 6

That's beautiful :)

'Sand castled hands' conjures some gorgeous imagery.

Answer 7

Good poem, good imagery and a lot of truth!

Answer 8

I absoultly love itt.  

Touching very touching