A poem anyone else feeling the same?

Question

Why oh why

did I have one more,

and one more for the road,

for I did not walk upon him

I bounced along I'm told.

I did not make it upstairs,

I crashed down on the floor,

I think the toilet had more hugs,

than he's ever had before.

lol x

Answer 1

that was amazing it seems almost real through my eyes if i were you i would get it published just search publish poem and you should get lots of places i think your poem is that good

Answer 2

oh yeah im feeling it!

Answer 3

lool did you write that?!