A poem called Life's heartache do you like it?

Question

It started so long ago' so young no where to go.

Too trusting thinking the world was so safe

till my dad cut pieces out of my face.

First my love " then my hate when he was done

I was in the darkest blackest place.

As i was ready to go and die ' he only laughed and said good bye.

Now i walk this earth alone' never any joy

not even a home.

Now i need to find a quite place ' as no one sheds a tear while i die all alone.

Now my life is almost done' took all the poisons and pills at a quarter to one.

Now i'm feeling dizzy and weak' fading fast ' now i must sleep..

Answer 1

  Your poem was a bit dark but i liked it a lot.Seems like you have maybe had some hard times  in life and that is why you write poetry of this nature. Thanks for sharing .

Answer 2

I liked this poem lots and i have been beat and abused many times by family members too' and it is so sad.I hope this is only a poem as it would be  to much to handle.