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A poem...dealing with death....?

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i wrote this a while back....in memory of Rachael

I knew you were hurting although you wouldnt cry,

And could see you were suffering, see the pain in your eye

I wanted to comfort you, to hold you, be with you that day,

You looked so helpless and frail while in bed you did lay.

I watched as you shivered from a new pain,

And wondered how I might have handled the same.

I wanted to scream, to shout, and to yell,

You said you were fine although your skin was so pale.

I knew in my heart your time was near end,

And wished I could take you, your body to mend.

I knew that soon God would be your closest friend,

You told me many times that's how it would end.

I stood there watching as each breath came slow,

And fought to find courage my emotions were low.

I promised you when the time came that Id not cry,

You never saw my eyes wet, always they were dry.

I held your hand as I silently said goodbye,

And knew in my heart that soon you would die.

I stroked your forehead and said how I loved you,

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  1. That was so sweet and touching. You had excellent emotion and love in it. You gave the read the feelings you felt. You made it seem so real. I have to say Excellent job.

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