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A poem for me mum?????

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Maria is a mother

Nice, sad, angry, and caring like no other

She has golden-brown hair like sand

She wonders what happened to her diamond gold wristband.

Maria went to ELAC college

Where she gained medical knowledge

LAC USC is where she works

Helping all who've been hit by flying corks.

Maria is angry with me if I'm bad

She's naive if I'm sad

She loves me when I'm good

But all she really wanted was food.

Maria likes music that is old

As if they were discs of gold

She also likes the lotto

She plans to buy a diamond grotto.

Maria is who I love

Like a turtle dove

Flying into my heart

From finish to start.

I wrote this two years ago. I found it in my mom's drawer and now that I look at it, I don't think I know how to write very well. Any opinions?

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  1. You write a lot more cogently than many others at this well of inspiration. Do not be afraid to continue and grow.


  2. lol, that poem is great, it really is great. The only one thing is that you could express yourself more and more, than just limiting to a few characteristics. Still, great poem!
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