A poem i wrote about a girl in my new college :) ?

Question

what do you think? its a girl in my college were 16 and she has amazing eyes lol :)

Blue bliss

Crafty eyes by now persist

streams on the river of blue bliss,

caught me again i wish longer

of that bejeweled wonder,

and when they met at glance

was his eyes to her trance,

just a glimpse, a second still

look up into her eyes i will.

Answer 1

Lovely....seriously