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A poem i wrote about my grandad who left me..Please read if you have time!!

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I miss you.....Grandad... ( By vikram chadha)

As the winds slowly start sweeping the days,

I look back on my life through a purple haze,

Thinking about those playgrounds,parks and friends,

In childlike gaze that never ends.

Running after each other in a game of catch,

Shall memories ever attach..

To that innocence in my youthful eyes,

Catching the ball to my Grandad's surprise.

I remember the first time i fell on that sand,

it was you who was there, who held my hand,

Convincing me to give that one more try,

While,knees skinned,I forgot to cry.

Just the fact that you were there,

Made me forget my worries and conquer that fear.

There was nothing i felt,i couln't conquer

With you by my side my confidence grew stronger.

The growing up years were kind of rough,

I was sure i wasen't too big or tough.

You taught me to defend myself when i was right,

even if that meant not backing down from a fight.

I learnt the hard way to stand,

Still,if i slipped,i found your hand.

You just gave me an inner strength,

with stubborn pride of equal length.

But then that line of fate was drawn,

As though i blinked and you were gone.

My eyes were blinded by a void inside,

I could not believe that you had died.

Finding this reality too hard to be true,

I realised that i could do nothing without you.

Please,grandad,today just hear my call,

I'm sorry that i dropped the ball.

My life is in a mess,my knees are skinned,

My emotions are now undisciplined.

I can't get up although i try,

Please don't be upset if now i cry.

Though i can't fight with what i can't see,

Please,Grandad,say you're still proud of me.

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  1. I read through your poem. It is well written and your emotions are clearly spelled.I can imagine what a great grand father he was.

    But what I cannot comprehend is what makes you so unhappy

    about your present state.

    The loss of the grand father would have created a void in your heart.

    That can be understood. But what makes you say that your life is in a mess, that your knees are skinned, and that your emotions are undisciplined?

    Surely life should go on as usual after the demise of your loved ones.

    The memories will remain, but to be so crest-fallen, you have some worries for which you may need empathy  from your parents,  relatives  friends, and your wellwishers.

    May your grandfather attain Nibbana (i.e. supreme bliss)


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    what do you think of my poem?

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  3. wow that's really good.

  4. I love this poem, I really do.It's sad man, I almost cried cause I can imagine this so well. Great poem and keep up the great work. A+ work.

    Seriously the best poem I have read in a while. =)

  5. Very sad indeed

    your grandad was a friend in need

    As I was reading your poem

    you were struggling

    The last paragraph sure said

    your true emotions

    One of the lines in the poem says

    My emotions are undisciplined

    however long ago your grandpa died

    the pain will not go away overnight

    Your poem has many memories

    You can treasure those

    but on the same token let those feelings out

    You did very well by writing this in poetry.

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