A poem i wrote needs a name and i want to know what you guys think of it?

Question

okay im probably not finished with it yet, i slopped some lines on there and i want to know what part of it needs fixing. i dont think its too good.

comeplete disarray, intentions clear as mud

i have painted a picture, a picture made in blood

no reason for the slaying, just a simple thought in my head

now the wife is mourning over the idea that left him dead

his throat stained with a erubescent grease

the bloodshed i needed to end this caprice

the blade hidden in my pocket, warm from the mutilation

running from the house when i come to the realization

today i killed a man, no true reason for his death

tonight ill pray for his peace on his dying breath

Answer 1

If

You think it is good? If - he had not died

Answer 2

today i killed a man

random killing

a murderer's tale

killed in cold blood

Answer 3

Dude that was very awsome continue writting

Answer 4

It's a tad gory and gruesome imagery, i don't really have any suggestions, it's nice in what you were trying to convey i guess.....the last stanza in particular leaves an impression on the reader.

Answer 5

Fogged Hearts or The Desired Death

Answer 6

"The Dead Poem"

Answer 7

Death

Answer 8

ummmm kinda scary haha, but well written.

what about "Death Called"

Answer 9

feeling fear