A poem of mine. Do you get the feeling?

Question

It's not a proper rhyming poem, it's meant to convey a feeling.

Please feel free to tell me what you think

Man you gotta wake up and see

I won't take orders for much longer

I just wait til I'm round the corner

Till I put my make-up on

I wear trousers when you're not there

I dance to the radio's songs

I touch the ceiling, I email boys

I even slide down the bannister.

I'm not going to stay behind

And be what you want me to be

I'm going to follow my dreams

But I'm not leaving my siblings behind

You can like it or lump it mate

There are worse things in life to do

Than to become a singer, and dance on stage

I mean, you could be a lawyer (ouch!)

You'lll never read this poem

You'll never dream that I wrote it

You'll never feel how it hurts to be told

Not to wear a pink pair of shoes

Answer 1

you did a very good job of conveying your feeling.

And, yes I did !

Answer 2

remember,

most poems dont rhyme at all.

and yours was AMAZING because it didnt.

i wouldnt change any of that.

many girls can relate .

i know i can..

Especially with my dad.

i FULLY got the feeling of your poem.

( hope i helped )

read mine?

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Answer 3

got the feeling! break away!

Answer 4

lol. i could totally relate!!!! LOL. i thought it was brillant. 9/10/ :D