A poem or a something else. please tell me your opinions:D?

Question

let your eyes glisten

let your tears fall

let your heart listen

to your inner call

emotions not a crime

when the hill your trying to climb

decides to fall down

and hits you with a frown

this is life

so forget the minor glitches

karma's coming round

to resolve the petty hitches

death is near

not a day away from here

don't let time escape you

don't revolve around fear

Answer 1

That is a really good poem i like it,

Answer 2

It's a poem yes and it scans very well (the rhythm). The rhymes work very well too. It's simple but grows on you.

Well done.

Answer 3

Hmmm not the worst poem I've heard, but not the best either.  You do a good job using imagery to convey your feelings but the overall flow is a bit off.  A little bit cheesy in spots but not bad, not bad.... work on your rhythm, other than that, I liked it.  

Answer 4

its a poem. nice