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A poem presented for your perusal perhaps?

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And now for something completely different...

LOOKING AT THE VIEW

It's a funny thing, but

now I can't look out of

my window without

thinking of you looking

at the view whilst smoking

a cigarette.

Kneeling on the end

of my bed, elbows on

windowsill, tranquil

and still - pert bottom

pointing at the ceiling.

What were you thinking,

what were you feeling

as you smoked your

cigarette?

It's been a while, but I

still haven't emptied the

ashray - the filter lies

there yet, surrounded

by ash - expired fire - a

funeral pyre of sorts

which reminds me of you

looking at the view

from my window.

You graced my room,

my bed, my life, all too

briefly - the memory, like

a knife, still cuts deep,

haunts my sleep and, night

and day, fills me with joy

and sadness at the same

time. Joy for what was -

and sadness for what

could have been

(but wasn't).

(Hold off, there's more in a moment - run out of space.)

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  1. Humorous as well as touching.

    Well done


  2. Keep it up!

    You have Talent!

  3. Very poignant!  I enjoyed it.  It obviously came from the heart.  Keep writing!

    Well done!  :)

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