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A poem suggestion...best one gets 10 points

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Hi guys, I have a best friend called Richie and I wanted to write a poem in a card to him that told him how sorry I am for not being there for him when he needed me and that I am always here (we both had a rough month and we were quiet with each other when we should've talked to one another...yeah typical guys). He is special to me and I love him (not in that way..lol)

I just want a nice original poem, I cannot write one as Im not good at this thing.

Thanks

Stevie

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  1. There was a young guy called Stevie

    Who didn't realise poems were cheesy


  2. A time to talk by Robert Frost

    http://www.ketzle.com/frost/time2tal.htm

    All the best

  3. hey there richie,

    i know things been a bit tricky,

    i know you thought you were on your own,

    im only at the end of your phone,

    if you dont feel like talking,

    then theres nothing wrong with us just chilling,

    some days life sucks,on others not so much,

    whether your up or down,

    ill always be around,

    it works both ways,

    you and me, mates,

    Always!

    A friend like you would be hard to find,

    i value our friendship,that you must know,

    if ive never told you before...well,

    now you know!

    if we dont speak for days at a time,

    its not because i forgot you,

    or ive got better things to do,

    its simply that i think of you,

    and time passes oh,so quick,

    but if i thought you needed me,

    ......i would be there in a tick!

    sorry it looked like i let you down,

    but for you my friend,

    i will always be around....

  4. Although your heart is in the right place in wanting to say this in a special way, Wouldn't your own words would mean so much more to him? If someone else writes a poem for you, it's almost the same as you finding a poem written by a professional poet that says what you want to tell him.

    The sentiments you describe in your request are rather poetic already. Just imagine him sitting there in front of you, and write what's in your heart. This may sound tedious or silly, but it works. If your brain speaks faster than you write, you might want try recording your thoughts.


  5. Roses are red

    Violets are blue

    talk to me Betch

    or imaa feck you !

  6. yo richie

    dont get bitchy

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