A poem without a name, Comments please?

Question

On days long gone

when I was young,

I knew a woman old,

who spoke of wisdom

she joyed to pass along.

As if she kept a secret

behind her wrinkled grin.

She spoke,

Youth has ever been

in love with love.

When you,

decide to marry

wed a man

who loves you more,

Why is that so,

Her face took on a beauty,

her eyes a glowing glint,

You'll find,

Love is a buried treasure

returned in double fold.

Answer 1

oh its very nice :) if u r gonna give it a title dont let it be too straight forward

Answer 2

Grandmas also know the miracle of true love!

Wonderful message here.

Answer 3

I love the message! This one made me smile...I will have to read it to my husband :)

Answer 4

i like it.

Answer 5

Jenny, Jenny...got one in here didn't you!  Well said.  First and last stanzas stand well!  I am smiling.

Answer 6

This is a deep poem It tells about the wonders of love and the things that you do not anticipate.I would title it:The mystery of Love"

All the best.

Excellent effort continue onwards with your creativity.

Answer 7

liked theme

a little mixed up

try improving it

Answer 8

Be careful, you will date yourself with this type thinking.

Answer 9

Well, well, you did an excellent poem!  Congratulations on the poem and the message!

Answer 10

the beauty of love,

the secreat of love...

Answer 11

Kind of romantic poem. OK

Love is a buried treasure

Lady and the love.

Nostalgic love.

Answer 12

I think that your there, but your not. I can feel it, your talented but just work on the flow of it. Poems are supposed to flow and when you read it out loud it sounds sort of weird because it doesn't flow. Like the last paragraph, the you'll find part is just too short along with the other ones. But other than that i can feel it when i'm reading your poem, you have definite talent. Your so awesome at capturing someones attention. I loved it.