A poem written for a friend?

Question

I just wrote this for a friend lastnight but it's not done yet but I just want to see what everyone else think about it. Please be honest and tell me how it sounds so far. So how does it sound?

"My love for you will forever be"

When I need someone by my side,

I know in you that I can confide,

When I am weak and need some guidance,

I know you wont give up on me because you have patience.

When I am lonely and need a true friend,

You are always there to lend a hand,

No matter what time it is day or night,

You stay with me until i'm alright.

When tears come from out of my eyes,

you let your emotions show and you also cry,

So many times you've wiped my tears away,

And held me in your arms and let me know that everything will be ok.

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Answer 1

I thought it was great, so I've given you a star.

For being the writer of poetry, that you are. <}:-})

Answer 2

it's sweet and simple. i'm sure your friend will love it. :)

Answer 3

i had to stop part way threw my eyes teared up on me

Answer 4

I read this as though it was meant for me and if someone had written this for me, it would be fantastic and I would be so privileged to have a friend like you.

Answer 5

It's okay.  

Answer 6

i really like it [:

its well put together

and this will make your friend feel so greatttt :D

its great so far

Answer 7

sounds very sweet, my guess is that this person is very close