A poem written for a friend? ?

Question

I just wrote this for a friend but it's not done yet but I just want to see what everyone else think about it. Please be honest and tell me how it sounds so far. So how does it sound?

"My love for you will forever be"

When I need someone by my side,

I know in you that I can confide,

When I am weak and need some guidance,

I know you wont give up on me because you have patience.

When I am lonely and need a true friend,

You are always there to lend a hand,

No matter what time it is day or night,

You stay with me until i'm alright.

When tears come from out of my eyes,

you let your emotions show and you also cry,

So many times you've wiped my tears away,

And held me in your arms and let me know that everything will be ok.

© 2008 Danophotos.com

Answer 1

That's good

The world would be a better place if more people could express themselves that way

Answer 2

I just woke up, & did not expect something this beautiful in the morning.

Answer 3

Hi Dano, I read the other poem you wrote the other day but this one is heartfelt. I love it and he should be lucky to have a friend like you. I wish you guys the very best.