A quote I created...?

Question

Would you think it makes sense?:

I've learned it isn't about what you want; but more of what you need. In life, you need to be passionate about something.

Strive for something; yearn for it, beg for it, plead for it. Something to set your mind to, a goal that will help you achieve

far more goals that you know of. To be successful, you need a drive. That drive is desire & desire is what you want in life.

In the long run, what you want is what you need; & we all need something to want.

Answer 1

wow thats pretty good.

Answer 2

You sound like an intelligent thoughtful 15 year old .

Answer 3

Sounds nice and it makes a lot of sense. I am about your age and i also enjoy making quotes. I dont really like your last sentence however, its kind of repetitive. Maybe you could fix that.

Answer 4

I think it makes sense, its good, if you want criticism, i would say instead of writing what you think sounds good, take time and really think about the message you are trying to get across, not everything meaningful has to sound beautiful, but nevertheless it is a nice quote :)

Answer 5

suuure it makes a ton of sense and i'm sure people can relate. by any chance, are you 15?

Answer 6

very nice... it makes absolute sense, and sounds good too :D

i congradulate you on coming to a conclusion like this without being 30 or so...lol, i am 13 :) still, it is a very good quote.