A re-post. Do you like my Ameri-Ku?

Question

New buds are popping,

like fireworks in summer.

never blink your eyes.

Answer 1

A fun Ku!  Things change so quickly in Spring, one day a bud, that afternoon a flower. Thanks.

Answer 2

  I rather like it a lot as it's soothing to remember all the cool things of spring and summer' especially after a long cold winter.

Answer 3

I do like it!  Nice job.

Answer 4

Yes, I like your Ameri-Ku.  Never blink your eyes or you will miss a beautiful wonder.

Answer 5

nice work

Answer 6

I do believe that this is a very Ameri--Ku--le

Beautiful setup<<<>>> Now onto Eyes a waterin' Nose a drippin' Be's a sneezin'.Never blink your eyes Ku-aze They are swollen shut  Allergies  Alegra -D  24 hour relief <<<<>>> this was Very Ku-le Very Ku-le indeed

Answer 7

I love it! Great imagery with the buds popping like fireworks.

Answer 8

excuse please  re-posting  against guidelines  no?

Answer 9

You Ku that Ku you Ku so well

Answer 10

Yes, I do like it! I like the great juxtaposition with the first and last lines; I love the way you segue from spring to summer -- very smooth.

This is one of those rare 'kus that each line stands on its own, can be transposed into other positions within the poem, and read well any way you go about it.

Great job.

T.

Answer 11

Your second line has only 6 syllables (fire is monosyllabic; check it out). Though you do not conform to the requirements in sensu stricto, your haiku is enjoyable enough.